This is my first try at 'wire' art and I'm pleased with how it came out, even the watercolor 'blobs' pleased me in the end. I enjoy this asthetic and I think it works well for this application. Obviously there are a number of improvements that I could have made with more time. For instance I got bogged down with the press and should go back and simplify that. I also noticed after it was done that there were too many time periods, and I would like to clean that up. The best way to do that is to redo the phone to match the car and the press. I think that the laptop isn't as jaring for some reason.  I enjoyed experimenting with this and will use this aesthetic in future.