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Critiques:

There were two main critiques I recieved while creating this project. Primarily, I was told to keep the designs simple and to the point.  This was my original idea, and I believe I stuck to it well.  All of the final designs are simple, and have minimal text.  Another critique I received was being to blunt with my design and perhaps a little to forceful.  I did not make changes to accompdate for these critiques, however.  I wanted the swim and dive team to use their legacy to their advantage and let their clothes present a more focused and intimidating group of young men.

Final:

Here is my final design.  It is simple and to the point.  Brophy Swim and Dive is not a team to be messed with.  I chose black because it resembles the clothes people wear to funerals.  Brophy will be showing up to the funeral of the opposing teams.  The Bronco on the front does not require text because everyone knows who we are and what we represent.  It is only there for intimidation.  The “Brophy” on the back of the shirt is there to remind other teams that they have to race us, and we came to swim, and swim fast.  Good luck to any other team, there going to need it.