This was a May 2010 submitted revision of in-game dialogue for Agharta Studio's 1112: Episode 2, v1.0.1.

Artifacts are broken down by scene, object, and action to aid the development team in quickly locating the affected text, while explanations explain my reasoning behind the edit.  Classifications—such as typographic, grammatic, synergistic, and pedantic—allow for prioritizing of the most relevant edits to the team's revision efforts.