Wow! Scads of info. Originally the text had room for pictures but the absolute wealth of information provided me by the campaign manager pretty much crowded them all out at this revision. Going forward I would have suggested edits �" I thought the organziation excellent, but the amount of information here was pretty eye-glazing. I would have been afraid the voter might have checked out before finishing. That said, the passion and genuine desire for accomplishment (and the admirable record of accomplishment) should not be doubted!
Still, I would have advocated for enough edits to get at least one or two small pictures in there.