Reviewing the comments on the first drawing I have decided to re draw several aspects of my female vampire while adding the improvments suggested to me by my peers. Improvments you can see in the second drawing are the change of her pants to give her a more humanoid and realistic look, I also decided to change the colour to match the other items of her clothing to keep with the style of the drawing. I have also attempted to improve the linework on the drawing to give it a smoother and cleaner look.