revamp

hehe. not yet the final one guys, still deciding what to put there. copywriter is still busy. But yeah, thanks to both of you :)

I disagree with the last comment (sorry) - But because the lines of text are quite long, you need a generous leading (more than 8 words and the eye finds it hard to return to next line), but I agree the leading is over on the smaller bodies of text. Also there's nothing wrong with hyphenation, as long as there's no more than 3 in a row - as this could hamper look, and readability.. nice work.

Nice. A few comments though, your text leading is a bit too big. The supporting copy is too small for me. I also suggest that you don't justify your paragraphs and take note that some of the words are hyphenated:-)