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Kelly Star

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Created: 03/28/08

Last Edited: 03/28/08

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Comments: 1

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eric harrison

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Parris Whittingham, 04-05-08

Parris
Parris, 04-05-08
I can see you finding yourself as a fashion photographer but a few things break the "fantasy" reality of these fashion shots. The biggest thing is I can feel the post-production work so every layer of skin augmentation feels like 2 pounds of makeup. I really wanna see how you can use that skill to unobtrusively enhance the natural beauty.

Also, I feel like you did not capture the best angles of these models. As a result most of them seem to cave-in on themselves instead of extending and giving the illusion of length. Lastly, I wanted to see more creative direction. You chose some GREAT locations but I get the sense that the placement of the models and the verbal direction were not consistent with your initial concept. I am sorry for writing such a long post. Especially, sorry if you are offended by my comments.

Personally, I think you have a lot of amazing skills to pull from and I want to see what happens when they all work to create a consistent high-fashion or fine art collection. I look forward to seeing your future projects!

Peace,
Parris
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